THE VISIT

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    • Fast as lightning ripping through the lonely sky,
      Slow as a snail for who no one awaits.
      Dark as a black horse striding through water,
      Yet as bright like a lamp in the dark.
      Antarctica warmer still than him,
      Warm as a hug given by a loved one.

      He came at the door and knocked soft,
      Powerful presence, when I opened the door.
      Shocked and in dread slammed the door.
      Years passed filled with pain and agony.

      I payed him a visit this time happily.
      Tit for tat he slammed the door.
      Due which, a new leaf was turned.
      Years later the powerful presence,
      But this time colder arrived.
      I did not want this, yet he came.
      Forcibly he took me far away,
      Never to return from the peaceful place.

      Invisible Ghost (Sara Parikh)
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    • Hello! This left me speechless.. I wrote something slightly similar, following a strange dream (perhaps I’ll post it here). Anyway, I found your poem to be beautifully crafted, very powerful, as it really paints a picture.

      Kind regards,
      Katja

      Katja
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